高三短文改錯練與析九篇

作者：李景莉

1

New York, London, Paris and other big city are nice and 1. ________

excited places to live in. There are many interesting things 2. ________

to see and to do them. You can go to various kinds of museums 3. ________

and place of interest. You can also go to the theatre and 4. ________

do some shopping. But there are lot of problems, too. 5. ________

There are too many people and the cost of living is low. 6. ________

Every year people move to big cities to find jobs and study 7. ________

at good colleges. But sometimes their wishes won't come true. 8. ________

Also, too many people make that hard to keep cities safe and 9. ________

clean. So think about the problems after you move to big cities. 10. ________

[答案與簡析]

1. city → cities。cities前面有other修飾, 表示泛指, 應該用名詞的複數形式。2. excited → exciting。excited意為"興奮的；激動的"；exciting意為"使人興奮的；激動人心的"。 3. 去掉them。此處的動詞不定式在句子中作定語，動詞不定式與所修飾的名詞有邏輯動賓關係，故them是多餘的詞。4. place → places。旅遊勝地不止一處，故place應用複數。

5. lot → lots或lot前面加a。a lot of和lots of都是固定短語，意為"許多"。 6. low → high。根據上下文，此處應該表示"生活費用高"。 7. and → or。此處表示選擇關係。 8. 本行無錯。 9. that → it。it在句子中作形式賓語，真正的賓語是動詞不定式。 10. after → before。 根據上文可知，作者是在勸告人們，在搬入大城市以前要考慮以下這些問題，即：人多、生活費用高、找工作難，等等。

2

Here are two types of cars may some day take 1. ________

a place of today's big cars. If everyone drives such 2. ________

cars in the future, there will be little pollution in 3. ________

the air. There will also be more space for parking 4. ________

cars in cities, and the street will be less crowded. 5. ________

Three such cars can be fit in the space now needed 6. ________

by one car of the usual size. The little cars will spend 7. ________

much less to own and drive. Drive will be safer, too, 8. ________

though these little cars can go only 65 kilometers per 9. ________

hour. But they will not be any use for long trips. 10. ________

[答案與簡析]

1. may前加that / which。這是由關係代詞that或which引導的定語從句，關係代詞在從句中作主語。 2. a→the。take the place of是固定短語，意為"代替"。3. little→less。根據語義，此處表示未來的汽車比現在的汽車造成的空氣污染少。另外，下句中的more space和less crowded也是很好的提示。4. 本行無錯。5. street→streets。此處表示不止一條街道，所以，street應該用複數形式。6. 去掉be。此處的fit是動詞，應該去掉be

7. spend→cost。spend的主語常指人，cost的主語常指物。8. Drive→Driving。此處是動名詞作主語。 9. though→as / because。此處表示因果關係，而非讓步關係。10. any前加of。這是固定句型，be of any use相當於be any useful。

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Dear Elli，

May I ask you two questions? As a senior student, I like make 1． ________

friends with people and I do my best to get on well to everyone． 2． ________

But last week I found that one of my friend said 3． ________

to others that she hated me． She didn't want 4． ________

to be my friend any way． Now she has started 5． ________

making fun of me because of I'm fat．I am kind 6． ________

to her but why can't she be friend towards me？ 7． ________

The other question is how lose weight． Do I have 8． ________

to do more exercise？ Use pills？ And do you know any other 9． ________

better way？Would you please give me some advices． 10． ________

Yours，

Mary

[答案與簡析]

1． make→making或在make前加to。like後可用動名詞或動詞不定式作賓語，此處沒有差別。 2． 第二個to→ with。get on well with是固定詞組，意為"與......相處得好"。3． friend→friends。one of後面的名詞應該用複數形式，表示"......之一"。 4．本行無錯。 5． way→more。not any more是固定短語，意為"不再"。6． 去掉第二個of 。此處是because引導的原因狀語從句，而because of後面接名詞性短語。7． friend→friendly。這裏應該用形容詞作表語，friendly意為"友好的"。 8． how後面加to。此處是"疑問詞+動詞不定式"作表語。 9． And→Or。此處表選擇關係。 10． advices→advice。advice在此處是不可數名詞，沒有複數形式。

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While visiting France, we decide to do some shopping. 1. ________

Not far the hotel there was a shop with all kinds 2. ________

of clothing hang up. When we went into the shop, 3. ________

a woman came up and asked that she could help us, 4. ________

so we said that we would like to look around by ourselves. 5. ________

She looked at us rather strange. Not having found 6. ________

anything we need, we thanked the woman and 7. ________

left. Suddenly my husband started to laugh, 8. ________

pointing to a small sign, which reading in English: 9. ________

"DRY-CLEANING SHOP. Please smoke here." 10. ________

[答案與簡析]

1． decide→decided。由下文可知，參觀法國是過去的行為，應該用動詞的一般過去式。2． the前加from。far from是固定詞組，意為"離......遠"。 3． hang→hanging。with all kinds of clothing hanging up構成"with+名詞+現在分詞"的獨立主格結構。4． that→if / whether。根據語義，此處應該用表示"是否"的連詞。5． 去掉so。當一位女士走上前問能否幫助我們做點什麼時，我們説我們只想自己四處看看。此句是when引導的時間狀語從句，主句前不應該再用連詞so。 6． strange→strangely。應該用副詞strangely修飾動詞looked。7． need→needed。 此處的need是實義動詞，應該用其過去式。 8． 本行無錯。 9． reading→read。過去式read是定語從句中的謂語動詞。 10． smoke前面加don't。根據常識，乾洗店內是不允許吸煙的。

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With the rapid development of society, great changes have been 1. ________

taken place in family life. Many years ago, people considered them 2. ________

rich to own radios, sewing machines and watches. Most people live in 3. ________

crowded houses. When they went out, they had to walk and go by bike. 4. ________

Nowadays, life is more better than it was in the past. Many ordinary 5. ________

families have color TV sets, washing machine, mobile phones and 6. ________

the other modern equipment. People can often go traveling by train or 7. ________

plane and some even car. You can see high buildings everywhere. 8. ________

The rich prefers to buy a flat far from the busy city. 9. ________

No one can imagine what a great change we will have. 10. ________

[答案與簡析]

1. 去掉been。take place意為"發生"，屬不及物動詞，不能用於被動語態。 2. them→it。consider作"認為"解，it作形式賓語，動詞不定式作真正的賓語。

3. live→lived。由上下文可知，此處指過去，應該用一般過去時態。 4. and→or。過去人們出行，或者步行，或者騎自行車。此處表示選擇關係。5. more→much。much用來修飾形容詞的比較級，表示"......得多"。6. machine→machines。由本句語義可知，此處的名詞應該用複數形式。 7. 去掉the。此處的other modern equipment表示泛指，如加上冠詞，則表示特指。 8. car前加by。本行and的作用是連接一個句子，省略了謂語部分，但此處的by不能省略，否則，語義表達不清。9. prefers→prefer。rich, poor, old, young, wounded, disabled等形容詞前加定冠詞時，表示一類人，作主語時，謂語動詞應該用複數形式。10. 本行無錯。

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Skiing is my favorite sport, even though I had only skied for four days1. ________

in my whole life! Last year my father promised that because my brother 2. ________

Victor did well in his exams, he would bring us for a special holiday. 3. ________

When Victor got straight A's, Dad said, "I promised a special holiday. 4. ________

I think I should keep my words." Victor's dream was to see real 5. ________

snow. So we flew to Seoul at Christmas vacation, and then took 6. ________

a bus to Muju Resort. As we climb up the mountain, we saw 7. ________

some snow on the trees. We began to play snow! No one in my 8. ________

family had ever touched snow before. We were all like the little children. 9. ________

We picked it up, made snowballs, and threw it at each other. 10. ________

[答案與簡析]

1. had→have。主句謂語動詞是一般現在時態，所以，狀語從句的謂語動詞應該是現在完成時態，不可能是過去完成時態。 2. because→ if。在that引導的賓語從句中，又包含一個條件狀語從句。在爸爸許諾時，考試還沒進行，所以，應該用if引導條件狀語從句。3. bring→take。此處的take表示"帶我們去"，不能用bring。4. 本行無錯。5. words→word。keep one's word是固定詞組，意為"遵守諾言"。6. at→for。for Christmas vacation意為"去度聖誕假期"。7. climb→climbed。應該用動詞的一般過去時態。8. play後面加with。play with snow意為"玩雪"。

9. 去掉the。little children表示泛指，其前面不用定冠詞。10. 第二個it→them。此處的them指的是snowballs，而不是snow。

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Attention, please, everyone. I have an announcement to take. 1. ________

We will pay a visit the museum on October 1st. 2. ________

I think you'll be interesting in it. In the course of the visit 3. ________

the guide will give us an account of the past or the development 4. ________

of our city. She will say something about the advancing workers, 5. ________

including some teacher. We will see many pictures there. 6. ________

I'm sure of that we can learn a lot. After the visit, we'll 7. ________

have a discussion in group and each of us should write a 8. ________

composition. We are to start out at 7:00 correctly. We should 9. ________

gather on time at our school gate. Thank you. 10. ________

[答案與簡析]

1. take→make。 have an announcement to make是固定搭配，意為"發表通知"。2. visit後面加to。此處的visit是名詞，pay a visit to the museum意為"參觀博物館"。 3. interesting→interested。be interested in意為"對......感興趣"，其主語常是人。 4. or→and。由上下文可知，導遊既介紹了城市的歷史，又介紹了城市的發展。所以，應該使用並列連詞and。5. advancing→advanced。表示"先進工作

者"時，應該用過去分詞作定語。

6. teacher→teachers。根據語義，此處的名詞應該用複數形式。7. 去掉of。 be sure of後面常接名詞、代詞或動名詞；此處的sure後接從句，則去掉of。8. group→groups。 in groups是固定短語，意為"分組地"。 9. correctly→sharp。表示"準時地"，用副詞sharp。10. 本行無錯。

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Dear classmates,

Now I'd like to tell you why I learn English. I often read 1. ________

English loudly and try to learn something important by 2. ________

heart, which help me remember it easily and form the 3. ________

good habit of thinking in English. I listen to a lot and talk 4. ________

with others in English. In this way, I am improved my 5. ________

speaking English. I keep a diary in English every day，so 6. ________

my written English is becoming better and better. I also try my 7. ________

best to master some necessary grammar. By this mean, I can 8. ________

express me in English correctly. That's the way I have been 9. ________

learning English. I hope it will useful to you. Thank you. 10. ________

[答案與簡析]

1. why→how。下文講的是學習英語的方法，而不是學習英語的原因，故用how引導賓語從句。2. loudly→aloud。read aloud是固定搭配，意為"朗讀"。

3. help→helps。which引導非限制性定語從句，修飾前面整個主句。所以，從句中的動詞應該用單數形式。 4. 去掉to。a lot作listen的狀語，不需要to；listen to構成固定搭配時，其後面應該有賓語。

5. am→have。此處應該用動詞的現在完成時態。6. speaking→spoken。spoken English意為"英語口語"。7. 本行無錯。 8. mean → means。means意為"方法；手段"，單複數形式相同。9. me→myself。express oneself是固定搭配，意為"表達自己的意思"。 10. will後面加be。句子的謂語動詞不完整，形容詞useful前面應該有動詞be。

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A man with two badly burned ear went to see 1. ________

his doctor. "What has happened on you?"asked the 2. ________

doctor. "Well, my wife is ironing while 3. ________

I was watching a ball game on TV. She put the 4. ________

hot iron near the telephone then my phone 5. ________

rang. I called the iron instead of the phone." 6. ________

The doctor nodded with a shrug of his shoulders. "But what did 7. ________

happened to other ear?" The man said, "Hardly had 8. ________

I hanged up when the same person called up 9. ________

again." The doctor can't help laughing when he heard this. 10. ________

[答案與簡析]

1. ear→ears。由下文可知，這位男士的兩隻耳朵都燙傷了，故該名詞用複數形式。2. on→to。 happen to sb.是固定短語，意為"某人發生了某事"。3. is→was。動詞的過去進行時態表示熨衣服的動作當時正在進行。4. 本行無錯。5. then→when。when表示動作的突然性，意為"正在這時"。 6. called→answered。表示"接電話"時，動詞用answer, 而不用call。7. 去掉did。醫生問另一隻耳朵又發生了什麼事，疑問詞作主語，用陳述語序即可。 8. other前加the。表示兩者之中的另一個時，用the other。9 . hanged→hung。表示"掛斷電話"時，hang的過去式是hung。 10. can't→couldn't。全文時態一致，應該用一般過去時態。