牛津譯林版高中英語單元複習學案Unit 3　Science versus nature(譯林牛津版高三英語必修五學案設計)

詞彙導練

1．Little Tom b____________like a gentleman at yesterday’s party.

2．Volunteers serve as ____________ (advocate)for abused children.

3．As many as 30,000 refugees died of hunger and lacking m____________care.

4．The shop assistant didn’t take the customer’s request s____________，as a result，his prize was kept back by the boss.

5．He is now out of work as a result of his c____________，which resulted in a great loss in business.

6．I can’t tell you____________(明確地)when I can finish the project.

7．Copper____________(傳導)electricity better than other materials do.

8．He____________(尋求)revenge(報復)against Surkov for separating him from his wife and son.

9．She wanted to be the first woman to climb Mount Everest，and she almost____________(成功)．

10．He had got prepared to take the____________(後果)of losing money when he decided to invest at the beginning.

11．Although he researches cloning，his____________(intend) has been to create copies of humans.

12．After all，scientists have been challenging questions of ____________(moral)for centuries.

1．behaved　cates　cal　ously　lessness nitely　ucts　ht eeded equence　ntion　lity

短語彙集

1．________________　　一方面

2．________________ 指出

3．________________ 一般來説，總體而言

4．________________ 義無反顧地進行，努力推進

5．________________ 以……告終

6．________________ 供出售，待銷售

7．________________ 用完，耗盡

8．________________ 準備就緒，佈置妥當

9．________________ 想出，理解，明白；計算出，演算出

10．________________ 幾天前；那天

11．________________ 對某人而言

12．________________ 贊同，支持

13．________________ 觀點

14．________________ 結果是，結果證明

the one hand　t out　 general　 ahead with　 up　 sale　 up　 place　re out　 other day　 one’s part favour of　t of view　 out

語句試譯

1．(迴歸課本P58)________ ________that is best for nature is good for people.

並非對自然有益的一切事情對人類都是好的。

2．(迴歸課本P58)Most of the time________ ________ ________ ________humans are not really profiting when they damage the environment.

在多數情況下，其結果是，人類在破壞環境之際沒有真正受益。

3．(迴歸課本P42)A recent announcement by scientists________they have successfully cloned the first human embryo has caused much debate...

科學家最近宣佈，他們已經成功克隆出第一個人類胚胎，這在全球範圍內引起了爭論……

4．(迴歸課本P42)In China，scientists have focused their efforts on cloning animals，________ ________ ________stem cells to be used in medical research.

在中國，科學家們已經致力於克隆動物，以及將在醫學領域中被使用的幹細胞。

5．(迴歸課本P43)________ ________ articles related to science，we often come across difficult or unfamiliar words.

在閲讀有關科學的文章時，我們經常會遇到難理解或不熟悉的單詞。

everything　 turns out that　　 well as　 reading

核心知識

al　adj.　正常的；正規的，標準的

n．　正規；常態

(迴歸課本P42)She was born in 1996 and died in early 2003，at a much younger age than normal.

她出生於1996年，死於2003年初，死時年齡比正常死亡年齡都小。

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It is normal for do sth.

對某人來説做某事正常

back to normal恢復正常

above/below normal超出/低於正常水平

abnormal adj.反常的(反義詞）

例句探源

①Rewrite the inverted sentences using normal word order.

用正常語序改寫下列倒裝句。

②So as you can see from what I’ve said，I’m a normal kind of people.

所以從我的敍述你可以瞭解到，我是一個很普通的人。

③(朗文P1392)It’s normal to feel nervous on your first interview.第一次參加面試感到緊張是正常的。

④(牛津P1358)Things soon returned to normal.

情況很快恢復了正常。

易混辨析

normal，common，ordinary，usual，regular

(1)normal與norm(規範，標準)同源，意為“符合標準的，正常的，正規的”。

(2)common用於物，指“因為常見而不稀奇，很平常”；用於人，指“沒有職位，不高貴”，強調具有某種共同點。

(3)ordinary指與一般事物的性質、標準相同，強調“平常、平庸”而無特別之處。

(4)usual指“經常的，慣用的”，強調習慣性的、符合規律制定的或一貫如此的。

(5)regular強調有規律的、定期的、固定不變的。

①We’re open during normal working hours.

②He was clearly no ordinary student.

③Let’s meet at the usual time.

④Jim is a common English name.

1．Letterboxes are much more________in the UK than in the US，where most people have a mailbox instead.

A．common　　　　　　　 B．normal

C．ordinary D．usual

解析：選A。句意：信箱在英國比在美國更常用，在美國大多數人都有一個郵箱。common的意思是“普通的，平常的”；normal的意思是“正常的，標準的”；ordinary的意思是“普通的，平凡的”；usual的意思是“平常的，慣例的”，表示發生的頻率，平常發生的。

2.(2010年高考福建卷)Drunk driving，which was once a________occurrence，is now under control.

A．general B．frequent

C．normal D．particular

解析：選B。醉酒駕車曾經是經常發生的事情，現在得到了控制。frequent頻繁的，經常的，符合題意。general一般的，全面的；normal正常的；particular特別的。

ntion　n．　意圖，目的，企圖

(迴歸課本P42)However，some people consider that cloning human embryos with the intention of destroying them shows no respect for human life.

但也有人認為，懷着摧毀人類胚胎的意圖來克隆人類胚胎，這是對人類生命的不尊重。

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(1)with the intention of doing/to do...

為了，以……為目的/意圖

without intention非故意地，無意地

by intention故意地

(2)intend v.打算，意欲，想要

intend to do/doing sth.打算做某事

intend do sth.打算讓某人做某事

intend sth.要使某人成為……

intend sb.為某人準備某物

be intended for為……準備的

例句探源

①It is not my intention to argue with you.

我不是想和你爭論。

②We intend the news report as teaching material.

我們打算把這篇新聞報道當作教材用。

③The book is intended for children.

這書是給孩子們用的。

④(朗文P1077)The music is different from how we intended it to sound.這音樂聽起來和我們想要的不一樣。

⑤(牛津P1062)He intended her no harm.

他無意傷害她。

went to Japan with the ________ of learning Japanese.

A．help　　　　　　　　　B．idea

C．concept D．intention

解析：選D。with the intention of是固定搭配，意為“抱有……的目的，打算”。

newlyMpublished book，which refers ________ basic English grammar，is ________ only for beginners.

A．as；meant B．for；intended

C．to；planned D．to；intended

解析：選D。refer to為固定短語，此處意為“涉及”；be intended for為固定搭配，意為“專為……準備”。

5．完成句子

(1)為了提高英語水平，他決定出國學習。

He has decided to go abroad to study________ ________ ________ ________improving his English.

答案：with the intention of

(2)我認為他這樣做不是故意的。

I don’t think he did it ________ ________/________ ________.

答案：by intention/on purpose

erate　adj.　拼命的，不顧一切的，孤注一擲的，鋌而走險的

(迴歸課本P42)I am desperate to have a child of my own’，she says.

她説“我現在迫不及待地想要有個自己的孩子”。

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例句探源

①I was so desperate on hearing that.

聽到這消息我簡直絕望了。

②Oliver，who was desperate with hunger and misery，rose from the table and walked towards the master with his bowl and spoon in his hand.

奧利弗已經被飢餓與苦難逼得什麼都顧不上，他從桌邊站起來，手裏拿着湯匙和碗，朝大師傅走去。

③His failure made him desperate.

失敗讓他鋌而走險。

④The man lost in the desert was desperate for water.

在沙漠中迷路的人極度渴望得到水。

⑤(朗文P548)Many East Germans were desperate to leave their homeland.許多東德人拼命想離開自己的家鄉。

⑥(牛津P542)In desperation，she called Louise and asked for her help.

在走投無路的情況下，她給路易絲打了個電話幫忙。

6．She was________to tell her grandfather that she had won the first in the composition h of the following is wrong?

A．hoped　　　　　　　　 B．eager

C．anxious D．desperate

解析：選A。句意：她急於想告訴爺爺她在作文競賽中得了第一。下面哪項是錯誤的？be desperate/eager/anxious to do sth.急於想做某事；hope不能帶 do，所以不能用於被動語態，故選A項。

lude　vt.& vi.　總結，下結論；結束；最後説

(迴歸課本P56)To conclude，I urge you to seek the opinions of the people of the UK on this matter so we can end this immoral practice immediately.

總之，我奉勸你徵求英國人在這個問題上的看法以便我們立刻終止這種不道德的行為。

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例句探源

①(朗文P410)The sales convention will conclude as planned on Sunday.銷售會議將於週日如期結束。

②(牛津P409)What do you conclude from that?

你從這些事實中得出什麼結論？

③Aristotle concluded that heavy objects always fell faster than light ones.

亞里士多德斷定重物總比輕物下落快。

④They came to the conclusion that it was a thief who had stolen their diamond necklace.

他們斷定是小偷偷走了他們的鑽石項鍊。

⑤In conclusion，I think there is hope for the future.

總之，我認為將來還有希望。

7．完成句子

(1)從他的外表，我們可以有把握地斷定他煙抽得很兇。

From his appearance we may safely________ ________he is a heavy smoker.

答案：conclude that

(2)音樂會最後以演奏國歌結束。

The concert________ ________the National Anthem.

答案：concluded with

(3)最後，我想感謝大家的幫助。

________ ________，I want to thank everyone for your help.

答案：To conclude

(4)你得出了什麼結論？

________ ________did you come to?

答案：What conclusion

(5)總之，我想説我今天過得很開心。

________ ________，I would like to say how much I have enjoyed myself today.

答案：In conclusion

eed　vi.　成功；達到目的，辦到，做成；接替，繼任；繼承

(迴歸課本P42)China has succeeded in producing clones of cows and goats，and continues to research ways in which cloning can benefit mankind.

中國成功地克隆出了牛和羊，並且繼續研究克隆有益於人類的方式。

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例句探源

①(朗文P2059)Officers succeeded in persuding the man to put down his gun.

警察成功説服那名男子放下了槍。

②Adams succeeded Washington as President.

亞當斯接替華盛頓任總統。

③(牛津P2017)She succeeded to the throne in 1558.

她於1558年繼承王位。

④Finally，I wish this year’s English speech competition a great success.

最後，我預祝今年的英語演講比賽取得圓滿成功。

8．一句多譯

他事業有成。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

答案：(1)He succeeds in his career.

(2)He is successful in his career.

(3)He is a success in his career.

lve　vt.　包含，包括；涉及；使參與；影響；與……有關

(迴歸課本P49)Although it involves some cost on your part，you will definitely agree it’s worth it!

儘管它包括你要承擔的一部分費用，你一定會認為它很值！

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例句探源

①Taking the job involves living abroad.

接受這項工作就必須在國外生活。

②(朗文P1091)A study involving longdistance runners is being done at the Medical Center.

醫學中心正在進行一項涉及長跑運動員的研究。

③(牛津P1078)I was so involved in my book I didn’t hear you knock.

我全神貫注在看書，沒聽到你敲門。

9．完成句子

(1)任務包括閲讀課文和設計問題與答案。

The tasks involve _____ texts and ______ questions and answers.

答案：reading；designing

(2)我捲入了湯姆和傑克的爭吵。

I____ ____ ____the quarrel between Tom and Jack.

答案：got involved in

(3)他專心致志地制訂計劃。

He_______ _______ _______working out a plan.

答案：was involved in

　vt.　敦促，催促，力勸；強烈要求；極力主張

n．　迫切要求，強烈慾望

(迴歸課本P56)To conclude，I urge you to seek the opinions of the people of the UK on this matter so we can end this immoral practice immediately.

最後，我力勸你去徵求一下英國人關於這個問題的觀點，以便我們能立即結束這種不道德的行為。

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例句探源

①He had been urged by his spiritual leader to enter the marathon though he had done no training.

儘管從未訓練過，他的精神領袖還是力勸他參加這次馬拉松比賽。

②(朗文P2265)During summer vacation，e regularly urged books on me.

暑假中，懷特夫人常常敦促我讀書。

③(牛津P2223)The report urged that all children be taught to swim.這份報告呼籲給所有的兒童教授游泳。

10．翻譯句子

(1)他極力勸她學好物理。

________________________________________________________________________

答案：He urged her to study physics well/into studying physics well.

(2)他們敦促我們和他們一起去。

________________________________________________________________________

答案：They urged us to go with them./They urged that we(should)go with them.

　vt.　徵求，尋求；探索，探尋

(迴歸課本P56)To conclude，I urge you to seek the opinions of the people of the UK on this matter so we can end this immoral practice immediately.

最後，我力勸你去徵求一下英國人關於這個問題的觀點，以便我們能立即結束這種不道德的行為。

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(1)seek peace/happiness/help/friendship

尋求和平/快樂/幫助/友誼

seek advice/wealth/fame徵求建議/追求財富/名譽

(2)seek to do sth.＝try to do sth.試圖做某事seek after/for 尋找，追求

seek out 找出，找到

seek through搜查遍(某處)

例句探源

①I went to the American embassy to seek help，but...

我去美國大使館尋求幫助，但是……

②We must seek out a solution to the problem.

我們必須找出解決這問題的方法。

③(朗文P1845)Local schools are seeking to reduce the dropout rate.地方學校都在尋求降低輟學率。

11．完成句子

(1)世界上的許多動物園繼續努力從中國尋求熊貓。

Many zoos around the world continue to________ ________ ________China.

答案：seek panda from

(2)我們力求找一種方法能使我們和周圍的人相處融洽。

We________ ________ ________a way to get along well with the people around us.

答案：seek to find

(3)我們不應當貪圖安逸，追名逐利。

One mustn’t________ ________comfort，personal fame and gains.

答案：seek after

t out　指出

(迴歸課本P42)On the one hand，some scientists point out that if you clone an embryo，you can produce valuable tissues and organs that could be used to save human lives.

一方面，一些科學家指出如果你克隆一個胚胎，你就可以生產出有價值的組織和器官，用來挽救人類生命。

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point to/point at sb./sth.指向某人或某物

...把……指向；把……對準，瞄準(某人用槍對準某人某物等)

point to表明，指向(主語為證據、時針以及賓語為某一方向時)

to the point中肯，切題，切中要害

off the point 離題

be on the point of doing sth.正要做某事時

there is no point in doing sth.做某事沒意義

例句探源

①(牛津P1527)He pointed out the dangers of driving alone.

他指出單獨駕車的危險性。

②When the mistake was pointed out to him he hastened to correct it.

當向他指出錯誤後，他連忙予以糾正。

③(朗文P1569)She pointed at my plate and asked why I wasn’t eating.

她用手指指我的盤子，問我為什麼不吃。

12．完成句子

(1)他向我們指出晚上獨自外出的危險。

He ________ ________the dangers of going out alone at night.

答案：pointed out

(2)所有的跡象表明，來年是成功的一年。

All the signs ________ ________ a successful year ahead.

答案：point to

(3)他指出我的錯誤。

He ________ ________my mistake.

答案：pointed out

(4)他指出，那個計劃有嚴重的缺陷。

He________ ________that the project lacked one important thing.

答案：pointed out

(5)我正要站起來回答問題，這時鈴響了。

I _______ _______ _______ _______ _______ _______the questions when the bell rang.

答案：was on the point of answering

(6)既然他已經聽説了這個消息，就沒有必要告訴他了。

Since he has heard about it，________ ________ ________ ________ ________him about the news.

答案：there is no point telling

up　以……告終

(迴歸課本P43)We could produce a monster，or even a superhuman race that could one day end up replacing us.

我們可能會製造出一個怪物，甚至是一個最終有一天會取代我們人類的超人類物種。

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end up doing sth.結束做某事

end up in＋n.以……而告終/結束

end up as＋n.以……身份而結束

end up＋adj.以……而結束

come to an end結束，告終

an end使……結束

put an end to...結束……

make ends meet使收支相抵

from beginning to end從頭到尾

例句探源

①If you try to remember everything you will end up remembering nothing.

如果你想記住所有內容，結果反而會什麼也記不住。

②(朗文P669)You could end up dead if you are not careful.

如果你不小心就可能送命。

③His last attempt at directing a movie ended up in failure.

他最後一次導演電影的嘗試以失敗告終。

13．完成句子

(1)我們原計劃出去的，但結果卻是在家看電視。

We were going to go out，but ________ ________ ________ TV at home.

答案：end up watching

(2)如果你繼續這樣下去，你早晚得進監獄。

If you go on like this，you’ll ________ ________ ________ prison.

答案：end up in

(3)無論你是否已準備好，有一天生命都將要走到盡頭。

Ready or not，someday it will all _______ ______________ _______.

答案：come to an end

(4)他們失業了，還要養活兩個小孩，無法維持起碼的生活。

Being out of work and having two young children，they found it impossible to ________ ________ ________.

答案：make ends meet

place　準備就緒，佈置妥當

(迴歸課本P45)I believe that strict laws should be put in place and governments should do more to stop human cloning.

我認為嚴格的法律應落實到位，且政府應採取更多措施來阻止克隆人類。

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例句探源

①The ropes hold you in place so that you don’t fall.

繩子會把你固定在適當的位置，從而不讓你掉下去。

②The chairman was ill so his secretary spoke in his place.

主席病了，因此他的祕書代替他發言。

③(朗文P1549)Look at that！You got all of my notes out of place!

看！你把我的筆記都弄亂了！

④(牛津P1508)Of course I was upset－just put yourself in my place.

我當然不高興--你設身處地為我想想。

14．完成句子

(1)一切準備就緒馬上出發。

_____everything ____ _____and start out at once.

答案：Put；in place

(2)他的話説得相當不得體。

His remarks were rather ______ ______ _____.

答案：out of place

(3)他將代替我去參加下週舉行的會議。

He will ______ ______ ______ ______ _____to attend the meeting to be held next week.

答案：take the place of me

句型解析

1【教材原句】　Not everything that is best for nature is good for people.(P58)

並非所有對自然界來説最好的東西都意味着對人類來説也是好的。

【句法分析】　not everything“並非所有的東西”，表示部分否定。

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含有全體概念的代詞、形容詞或副詞，all，both，every，everyone，everything，everybody，everywhere，necessarily，entirely，altogether，absolutely，whole，wholly，completely，always，often，quite等與not搭配使用時，表示部分否定，意為“並非都是；不是每個都是”等。

15．一句多譯

(1)我所有的同學不都是團員。

____________________________ League members.

____________________________ League members.

答案：Not all of my classmates are；All of my classmates are not

(2)他們兩個並不全是醫生。

Not both of them are doctors.＝________ of them are ________ doctors.

答案：Both；not

(3)不是每個人都能做這件事。

________________ can do it.＝________________ do it.

答案：Not everyone；Everyone can’t

2【教材原句】　When reading articles related to science，we often come across difficult or unfamiliar words.(P43)

在閲讀有關科學的文章時，我們經常會遇到難理解或不熟悉的單詞。

【句法分析】　句中的when reading是“連詞＋現在分詞”的形式，是狀語從句的省略形式，相當於when we are reading。

歸納拓展

(1)當狀語從句的主語和主句主語一致，且從句中含有系動詞be時，可以省略從句主語和系動詞be，構成“連詞＋名詞/形容詞/介詞短語/現在分詞/過去分詞/不定式”的省略結構。連詞常有：when/while/once/as/as if/unless/until/even if/though等。

(2)當從句的主語是it，謂語中又含有系動詞be時，可以把it和系動詞be一起省略，構成“連詞(if/unless/when/whenever)＋形容詞”結構。

16．完成句子

(1)你在年輕時要努力工作，否則你會後悔。

Work hard ________(________ ________)________，or you’ll regret.

答案：when(you are)young

(2)他向四周看，好像在尋找什麼東西。

He looked around ________ ________(________ ________)________ ________ ________ something.

答案：as if(he was)in search of

(3)除非這次事故得到適當處理，否則將會造成很多的麻煩。

The accident will cause lots of trouble ________ ________ ________ properly.

答案：unless dealt with

(4)如果有必要你可以向老師求助。

________(________ ________)________，you can turn to your teacher for help.

答案：If(it is)necessary

作文指導

應用文(例：書信類)

【體裁導航】

英文書信一般分為商業信函(Business Letters)和私人書信(Personal Letters)兩種，而高考書面表達一般都是要求寫私人書信。英文書信格式與中文書信格式有許多不同，它包括五部分，即信頭、稱呼、正文、結束語和簽名，具體如下：

1．信頭：寄信人的地址和寫信日期，寫在信的右上角。注意英語中地名的寫法與中文不同，要從小到大；日期的寫法也與中文不同，不是寫在簽名之下，而是寫在寄信人的地址之下。習慣上人們採用美式英語表達，即月、日、年，月、日與年之間用逗號隔開，月份儘量不要縮寫，如June 8,2007；而英式英語表達則為日、月、年，中間不用逗號隔開，如8 June 2007。

2．稱呼：自成一行，頂格寫。稱呼語常用：Dear Sir/Madam/Manager/Editor/friends/Bob，稱呼之後一般用逗號。

3．正文：信件的主體部分即為信的正文。正文寫在稱呼的下一行，與Dear後第一個單詞對齊。正文通常包括三部分，即開頭、目的和結尾。正文的開頭語常用：Thank you for your last letter asking about...；I’m glad to...。正文的結尾語是正文的一部分，常常另起一行，常用的結尾有：I’m looking forward to your reply；Thanks and all the best；Best wishes；Wishing you a pleasant journey。

4．結束語：結束語與正文的結尾語不一樣，它要寫在結尾語的下一行，位於書信的右下角，後面用逗號。常用的結束語有：Yours sincerely/faithfully/truly；Sincerely/Truly yours；Yours等。

5．簽名：簽名寫在結束語的下一行，與結束語對齊，也就是簽上寫信人的名字。

一封正規的私人書信格式如下：

Dear David，

I’ve learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【寫作示例】

假設你叫李平，你從報上得知某公司欲招聘一名英語翻譯，請你給該公司經理寫一封求職信，你的個人資料如下：

要求：1.根據上述要點，寫一封求職信；

2．要點齊全，行文連貫；

3．詞數：150左右。

【寫作要領】

求職信屬於公務信函，格式和用詞比較正規。

信的內容可分為三部分：一、 寫信目的；二、自我介紹；三、要求與願望。第一部分(第1段)為信的開頭，直截了當地提出想要應聘英語翻譯一職，並表示出誠意。第二部分(第2段和第3段)為自我介紹，詳細説明自己的基本狀況、學歷、工作經歷、特長、愛好等。

在行文、用詞上要表現出自信、懇切的態度，語言簡明扼要，突出介紹自己的優點，與眾不同的特長或有利條件。還要緊扣用人單位的需求，巧用詞語，勇敢地説服對方：此職位非你莫屬。第三部分(第4段和第5段)再次表明自己申請該工作的誠意，並可提出要求進一步聯繫的途徑，如留下電話號碼或聯繫地址，還可以主動提出接受面試或考核等。另外，信的結尾處應表達一下希望儘快答覆的心願。

注意：此文用第一人稱來寫，主體時態用一般現在時。

【金點模板】

Dear____________，

I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in________(報紙名稱)of________(廣告發布時間). /I am applying for the position of__________(想申請的職務) advertised in___________.

I majored in___________(專業). My training in________(接受過的培訓) definitely meets your qualifications. My complete resume is attached.

I will graduate on____________(畢業時間)from___________(畢業院校).

In addition to the required courses of my major, I have__________(除專業外，選修的課程). I also have some experience in_______(曾有過的社會工作經驗). You will find me to be________(請對方對自己有信心).

May I have a personal interview at your convenience? I can be reached by telephone. / If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at_______(電話號碼)．

Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming

【範文點評】

Dear manager，

①I learned from the newspaper that your company wanted to hire an English translator.②I’m interested in this job very much because I have been dreaming of being a translator.

Now I’d like to introduce myself to name is Li Ping.I’m a young man of 30, 180 cm tall and my spare time I enjoy swimming, dancing and singing.

③After graduation from Beijing Normal University in 2000 as one of the most excellent students, I went to work as an English teacher in Nantong High School for three e 2003, I’ve been working in Suzhou High School.

④During my teaching career, I have made a lot of friends in various fields and developed profound friendship with each other.I’m proficient in English and I’ve translated many Chinese books into English.⑤My spoken English is especially good and my foreign friends often praise me for my accent.

⑥I do hope that my qualifications and experiences meet your so, please write a letter to me or phone me.I live at No.1 Renmin Road, Suzhou phone number is 05128765432.

⑦I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours truly，

Li Ping

點評：

①I learned from the newspaper交代信息來源。

②dream of doing sth.用得恰到好處，表明求職的誠意。

③該處as one of the most excellent students突出自己的優勢；after引出時間狀語，使句式更多樣化。

④介紹個人工作經歷，並根據所申請工作的特點，突出自己善於交際的能力。

⑤通過適當地添加細節，説明自己擅長英語口語。

⑥用助動詞do表強調，充分表現出想得到這份工作的急迫心情。

⑦以書信中的常用句式收尾，規範得體。

【類題嘗試】

閲讀下面一則廣告，按要求完成寫作任務。

假設你是李華，這則廣告引起了你的興趣，請用英文寫一封自薦信。要點如下：

1．對夏令營主題的理解；

2．根據招聘要求自我介紹；

3．參加夏令營的目的。

注意：1.信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；

2．詞數100左右。

Dear Sir，

I’m Li Hua from Fujian.______________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Sincerely yours，

Li Hua

One possible version：

Dear Sir，

I’m Li Hua from Fujian. When I was reading the advertisement, the aim of this activity impressed me greatly.I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.

As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12.I think it is a kind of winwin activity. For one thing, I can help take care of the another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Sincerely yours，

Li Hua