三種英文道歉信美文參考兼講解

因過失或疏忽做錯了事，給別人帶來了麻煩或損失，發覺後要立即寫信給對方賠禮道歉，這是一種禮貌。道歉信要寫得坦率，誠懇。

1、因未能踐約赴宴致歉Unable to keep one’s promise

Dear Miss Nancy,

Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your birthday party last Saturday, owing to the fact that my little son was suddenly taken ill early that day. Hoping to see you soon.

Truly yours,

Tom

親愛的南希小姐：

小兒上週六突然生病，因此未能應約赴生日宴，殊覺抱歉，希原諒，再見。

2、因遲復來信致歉Because of answering one’s letter late

Dear David:

I am afraid that you will think me unpardonably negligent in not having answered your letter dated 7, December sooner, but when I have told you the reason, I trust you will be convinced that the neglect was excusable. When your letter arrived, I was just in Hong Kong. As my family could not forward it to me during my absence, it has been, therefore, lying on my desk until the moment when I took it up. Now the first thing I have to hasten to do is to write to you these few lines to express my deep regret. I enjoyed many pleasant sights during my trip. I shall be pleased to give you an account to of them when I see you next.

Sincerely yours,

Tom

親愛的戴維： 請原諒我收到您12月7日的來信後遲遲未復，現將原因告訴您，相信您一定會諒解的。您的來信到來時，我正巧在香港，家人無法及時轉遞。你的信一直放在我寫字枱上，直到我回到才看見，拖至今天才回信，深表歉意。 這次出去旅行飽覽了許多美麗景色，下次見到您時，將告訴您一切。

3、因未能及時還書致歉Unable to return borrowed book on time

Dear Kate:

Excuse me for my long delaying in returning to you your “Robinson Crusoe” which I read through with great interest. I had finished reading the book and was about to return it when my cousin came to see me. Never having seen the book, She was so interested in it that I had to retain it longer. However, I hope that in view of the additional delight thus afforded by your book, you will overlook my negligence in not returning it sooner. Thanking you again for the loan.

Sincerely yours,

Tom

親愛的凱特：

我遲遲未能歸還您的那本《魯濱遜飄流記》，請原諒。該書我讀得津津有味。讀完後，正預備歸還您時，我的表妹來訪，見這本書也感興趣，定要借去一讀。為了讓別人也能分享您那本書所給予的樂趣，我不能及時歸還。我想再延遲些日子奉還，諒您不會介意的。

一封信的回覆 A reply to a letter

A reply to a letter

Dear Mary,

I am sorry to learn that you are not happy. Those who treat you badly won't be your true friends, so don't take it seriously. I advise you to avoid her and pay no attention to her joking. If you seem not to care what she says or thinks, she will get tired of making fun of you. I suggest you should not worry about what other people think and feel about you any more.

Best wishes.

Yours

Tracy

一封信的回覆

親愛的瑪麗，

我很抱歉地得知你不快樂。那些對你不好的人不會是你真正的朋友，所以不要把它當真。我建議你避開她，不注意她開玩笑。如果你似乎不在乎她説什麼或想什麼，她會厭倦了取笑你。我建議你不要擔心別人怎麼看你的想法。

最美好的祝願。

你的

特雷西

考研英語寫作小作文批改範文：感謝信

0-4分

第一篇

Dear Elle,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would have been appearing in once a year campus dancing party.

Everyone agrees that it was you who generously offered dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Elle,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help(for 後面不能加句子，可改為your help) at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend(改為 lending) me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would (加 not)have been appearing (appeared)in(改為at) once a year (可以用一個定語從句來修飾，此處刪掉)campus dancing party(加上 ,which is held only once every year ).

Every one agrees that it was you who generously offered(加the ) dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

2分

微點評：第一段的最後一句話中，由於沒有寫not，使文章的意思完全相反，因此，一定要好好研究一下虛擬語氣的用法。另外，for 後面是不能加句子的。

第二篇

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you to help me to improve my English during these days. If it had not been for your assistance in teaching me various knowledge including the culture of English, Then help me to practice English face to face, I fear that I would have been seek to the way of learning English for a long time without your help.

Everyone agrees that it was you who are warmly and likely to help others without the pay. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

修改意見：

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you to help me to improve my English during these days. If it had not been for your assistance in teaching me various knowledge including the culture of English, Then(刪除) help(改為helping) me to practice English face to face, I fear that I would have been seek(改為seeking) to the way of learning English for a long time without your help.(刪除)

Every one agrees that it was you who are warmly and likely(likely 是很可能的意思)to help others without the pay(it was …who..是強調句，此句可以改為，it was you who are so warmly to help others for free). Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

4分

微點評：寫完書信要有yours sincerely 和你的名字。英語的句號是.此外，建議你看一下關於強調句和虛擬語氣的知識。

第三篇

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the help you give me about learning English. If it had not been for your assistance in a variety of activities including holding funny discussions with me, teaching me singing English songs, playing simple English games, and so on, I fear that I would have been searching a wrong and difficult way to learn English and feeling unhappy to learn it.

Every one agrees that it was you who give me many opportunities to speak English loudly, beacuse you know that I am so shy to talk with others by English. Your help raise my level of proficiency in English, and now I enjoy greatest interst in English both listening and writing.

Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the help you give(改為gave) me about learning English. If it had not been for your assistance in (in 後面要加doing sth.)a variety of activities including(刪除) holding funny discussions with me, teaching me singing English songs,(加and) playing simple English games, and so on(刪除), I fear that I would have been searching(改為going) a wrong and difficult way to learn English and feeling unhappy to learn it(刪除).

Every one agrees that it was you who give(改為gave) me many opportunities to speak English loudly, (改為use 首字母大寫)beacuse(拼寫錯誤，改為because) you know that I am so shy to talk with others by(改為in) English. Your help raise my level of proficiency(中式英語) in English, and now I enjoy ( have)greatest (改為great)interst(拼寫錯誤interest) in English both listening and writing.

Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

3分

微點評：標點符號與後面的單詞之間空一格。歎號後面的第一個單詞首字母也要大寫。單詞拼寫的錯誤儘量避免。建議你好好學習一下有關虛擬語氣的知識點，多讀一些英語文章，可有效杜絕中式英語。

第四篇

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm help in the process of my seeking job conformed to my past decades training, after i graduated from peking university.

If it had not been for your assistance in recommendation to the prestigious company in China. i fear that i would have been on the job road back and forth .i really appreciate this precious opportunity ,which you offered. every one agrees that it was you who wrote a letter to the esteemed company boss, regarding as my qualifications ,education back –ground ,and my special skills at computer program which i have a huge intrest in. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! please accept my gratitude.

修改意見：

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm help in the process of my(刪除my) seeking job conformed to my past decades training, after i(大寫)graduated from peking university(兩個單詞的首字母大寫).

If it had not been for your assistance in recommendation (改為recommending)to the prestigious company in China. i(大寫)fear that i would have been on the job road (中式英語)back and forth .i really appreciate this precious oppotunity(拼寫錯誤opportunity) which you offered. every one(首字母大寫) agrees that it was you who wrote a letter to the esteemed company(刪除) boss, regarding as(刪除) my qualifications ,education back –ground ,and my special skills at computer program which i have a huge intrest in(刪除). Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! please(首字母大寫)accept my gratitude.

My sincerely,

Li Ming

4分

微點評：作文內容很豐富，但是你的表達能力還有待提高，而且要注意書信的寫作格式，以及大小寫的問題。

第五篇

Dear teacher,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your help to improve my English. If it had not been for your assistance in the respect of English writing, I fear that I would have been so outstanding achievement.

Every one agrees that it was you who are kindness and seems that you don’t feel tired forever. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear teacher,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your help to improve my English. If it had not been for your assistance in the respect of English writing(in 後面應該加動名詞，此外，respect 是尊敬的意思，用詞不當), I fear that I would have been so outstanding achievement.(這句話是虛擬語氣，意思是如果不是你的幫助，我恐怕將會…)

Every one agrees that it was you who are kindness and duty(it was…who…是個強調句，這句話的意思是每個人都説是你…例如幫助我)It seems that you don’t feel tired forever. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

2分

微點評：英語的句號是.你的英語基礎比較薄弱，建議你多看看英語範文，背一些模版。

5-7分

第一篇

Dear Pro. Smith,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your assistance. If it had not been for your assistance in sending timely the list of reference books which I asked for, I fear that I would have not been achieved my essay on the deadline.

Everyone agrees that it was you who save munch valuable time for me to search the reference books in the library and these reference books which are rather professional conform to the requirements of my essay. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Pro. Smith,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your assistance. If it had not been for your assistance in sending timely(刪掉)the list of reference books(加to me timely) which I asked for, I fear that I would have not been achieved my essay on(改為by ) the deadline.

Everyone agrees that it was you who save(改為saved) munch (拼寫錯誤，改為much)valuable time for me to search the reference books in the library and these reference books which are rather professional conform to the requirements of my essay. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

6分

微點評：寫作文時要再細心一些，儘量避免單詞拼寫的錯誤。時態要保持前後一致。

第二篇

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot find the way coming back.

Everyone agrees that it was you who patiently guide me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel (改為in the journey)abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling (改為on the trip)that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot(改為couldn’t) find the way coming back.

Every one agrees that it was you who patiently guide(改為guided) me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

6分

微點評：作文寫得還不錯，但應保持時態的前後一致以及固定搭配。

第三篇

Dear Teacher,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your ongoing patience and selfless care. If it had not been for your assistance in our English study, I fear that I would have been failed my CET4 and CET6.

Even one agrees that it was you who has always been devoting most of your free time to day to day English teaching and instruction in test-taking skills. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Teacher,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your ongoing patience and selfless care. If it had not been for your assistance in our English study, I fear that I would have been failed(改為failing)(加to pass) my CET4 and CET6.

Even one agrees that it was you who has(改為 had) always been devoting most of your free time to day to day English teaching and instruction(改為instructing) in test-taking skills. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

7分

微點評：作文沒有什麼大問題，但是要注意時態的一致以及某些句型的固定用法。

第四篇

Dear sir,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness to lend me the umbrella. If it had not been for your assistance in lending the umbrella to me when it was raining，I fear that I would have been in trouble to get home.

Every one agrees that it was you who always helping others in trouble. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely

修改意見：

Dear sir,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness to lend me the umbrella. If it had not been for your assistance in lending the umbrella to me when it was raining，I fear that I would have been in trouble to get home.

Every one agrees that it was you who always helping(改為 helped) others in trouble. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely(加逗號)

加名字

5分

微點評：小作文的字數要求是100詞，不要少於100詞，否則是要扣分的。書信的寫作格式要牢記於心。要注意時態的一致性。雖然作文沒有什麼大問題，但內容過於簡單，其實你可以把內容再擴充一下，用一些高級的詞彙和句型。

第五篇

Dear Ms. Wang,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness help last week. If it had not been for your assistance in bringing me my admission card for examination in time, I fear that I would have been missed the opportunity to be a servant in the government which I have prepared for a long time.

Every one agrees that it was you who are my deliverer to save me from such troublesome situation. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Ms. Wang,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness(改為kind) help last week. If it had not been for your assistance in bringing me my admission card for examination in time, I fear that I would have been missed(改為missing) the opportunity to be a servant in the government which I have prepared for a long time.

Every one agrees that it was you who are(改為were) my deliverer to save me from such troublesome situation. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

6分

微點評：寫作文時要再認真一點，寫完後再檢查一遍，有些小錯就可以及時改正，另外，建議你去看一下虛擬語氣的句型。時態要保持一致。

8-10分

第一篇

Dear Tommy,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you timely returning admission ticket to me.

If it had not been for your assistance in warmheartedly picking up my admission ticket and getting it back to me, I fear that I would have been missed my law exam held for once a year.

Every one agrees that it was you who came to help me and saved me from the trouble. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Jane Yang

修改意見：

Dear Tommy,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you timely returning admission ticket to me.

If it had not been for your assistance in warmheartedly picking up my admission ticket and getting it back to me, I fear that I would have been missed(改為missing) my law exam held for once a year.

Every one agrees that it was you who came to help me and saved me from the trouble. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Jane Yang

8分

微點評：作文寫得很不錯，但是要注意虛擬語氣的用法，建議再複習一下。

第二篇

Dear Eleven,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement to me. If it had not been for your assistance in my Olympic Game in Maths. I fear that I would have been give it up early.

Every one agrees that it was you who encouraged me to persist on the game all the time and always helped me make a lot of preparations for the game, so I had the confidence in myself and won the game at last. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Eleven,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement to me. If it had not been for your assistance in my (加上study of)Olympic Game in Maths(奧數是Mathematic Olympiad ). I fear that I would have been give(改為giving) it up early.

Every one agrees that it was you who encouraged me to persist on the game all the time and always helped me make a lot of preparations for the game, so I had the confidence in myself and won the game at last. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

8分

微點評：這篇小作文整體來講寫的不錯。建議你如果遇到某些不確定但又不是非常重要的專有名詞，可以改為其他有把握的'詞，例如本篇作文中提到的奧數，完全可以改為其他的比賽。

a letter applying for a position of a company 求職信

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am senior from the Department of Business Administration of Beijing University. I am writing the letter in purpose of applying for admission into your esteemed institution/your recently advertised position for a staff member.

I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience. Second, not only do my qualifications and experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my cheerful personality is well suited to studying in your prestigious university/working as a staff member. Last, my hobbies include sports and music.

Words fail me when I try to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help you rendered me. Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

The First Time I Lie 第一次撒謊

When we go to school, our teacher tells us children should never lie to parents, but I don’t obey it all the time. I still remember the first time I lie to my mother. I told her thatI need some money to buy a book. I didn’t tell her the right money, and I ask her to give more than I need. My mother knew it,than I feel regret and say sorry. Since then, I never lie to my mother.

當我們上學的時候，我的老師告訴我們孩子不應該對父母撒謊，但是我沒有一直遵守它。我仍然記得我第一次對我媽媽撒謊。我告訴她我需要錢買書。我沒有告訴她正確的錢，我多要了錢。媽媽知道了這件事，我很後悔並道歉。自那以後，我從來不對我媽媽説謊。

a letter to parents 一封給父母的信

Dear Mum and Dad,

How are you doing ?

I ‘m writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan.

Dear Mum and Dad, I am already 18 years old, which shows that I have grown up. Whenever I am thinking of this, I can’t help feeling grateful to you . It is you who first give me encoutagement when I meet with difficulties, especially when I am not getting along well with my studies. Indeed, your inspiration seems to be a lamp, which offers me light of hope, courage and confidence. And more importantly, you are always teaching me to be good to others, and try to contribute to our society.

Dear Mum and Dad, I an now a senior three student , who is facing the competitive national college entrance examinations, So first of all, I ought to try my best to pass the exams. I am sure that through my great efforts I can and will be able to realize my beautiful dream of being a key university student. Then, I will strive to be an independent youth. The social situation I will be facing must be more competitive, so I will develop and prepare myself to be a youth with a strong sense of cooperation and competition. Believe in me, Mum and Dad, I will make a difference.

Best regards to you .

Yours sincerely,

Wang Hua

親愛的媽媽和爸爸,

你們過得如何?

我寫信給你關於我感謝你們給帶來我未來的計劃。

親愛的媽媽和爸爸,我已經18歲,這表明,我已經長大了。每當我想到這裏,我不禁感到感激你。這是你們第一次給我勇氣，t當我遇到困難時,特別是當我沒有學習好時。事實上,你的靈感似乎是一盞燈,提供我的希望、勇氣和信心。更重要的是,你總是教我要善待他人,並試圖為我們的社會作出貢獻。

親愛的媽媽和爸爸,我現在一個高三的學生,面對競爭激烈的高考,所以首先,我應該盡我最大的努力通過考試。我相信通過我的努力我可以和能夠實現我美麗的夢想成為一個重點大學的學生。然後,我將努力成為一個獨立的青年。必須面臨的社會情況我將更有競爭力,所以我將開發和準備一個青年強烈的合作與競爭。相信我,媽媽和爸爸,我將發揮作用。

向你問好。

你的真誠,

王華