高考英語滿分作文：Green Action in Our Class

導語：小編為你整理，每年全國各地的高考英語滿分作文，説不定其中就有你不知如何下筆的類型。拿起你的筆記來記錄吧，為你的英語作文添亮點，讓英語成績更出色。

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【試題回放】情景作文

假設你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華，為響應綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區植樹，請根據以下四幅圖的先後順序，介紹植樹活動的全過程，給某英文雜誌的“綠色行動”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。

注意：詞數不少於60

提示詞：郊區suburbs

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

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本文是設計巧妙的提綱要點式作文，與環保結合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點連貫，在語言的表達上選詞新穎，同時運用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達。

英語專四作文滿分範文：學生評價老師

專四題目：學生評價老師

Many students are required to evaluate their teachers but some teachers complain that these evaluations are unfair and can in some cases lead to the dismissal of a teacher. In your opinion, is the students' evaluation of their teacher a worthwhile exercise?

專四範文：

Difficulties with Students' Evaluation of Their Teacher

The students' evaluation of their teacher can be a very subjective proposition because it depends a lot on how the evaluation is made and how it is subsequently used. I believe most teachers would like to know how effective their teaching really is and how it benefits their students.

A difficulty with students' evaluation of their teacher is finding the right formulae to achieve an honest, constructive and independent response. The size and makeup of the class can be a reason for this difficulty. The larger the class the more likely will be the range of ability in the students. That fact Limits the interaction between the teacher and individual students and automatically influences how students will perceive the effectiveness of their teacher. Smaller classes are much less likely to have a great range of ability in the students and their evaluation of their teacher will tend to be more consistent. A crucial aspects with students' evaluation is how it is used. If it is a formal part of the school's program it needs to be used constructively in liaison with the teachers for the benefit of both teachers and students.

For students' evaluations to be worthwhile they need to be independent and honest. Negative comments from students, delivered with sincerity, can be very valuable in helping teachers change their teaching methods and making them more effective. Biased evaluations can lead to misinterpretation and less productive outcome. (237 words)

更多專四作文精彩句子：

evaluation process depends on the methods used and how the evaluation is applied.

評價過程取決於使用的評價方法以及評價是如何進行的。

dealing with opinions,it is usually very difficult to be entirely objective,

我們表達觀點的時候，很難做到完全客觀。

hers can be more effective with genuine feedback from their students.

老師從學生那裏得到真實的反饋時，他們會更有效率。

s size has a significant impact on students’ perceptions of their teacher.

班級大小對學生對老師的看法有重要的影響。

some ways,negative feedback is more valuable to a teacher than positive comments.

在某種程度上，負面的反饋比正面的評價對老師更有價值。